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~Merieth 2 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
done: [link]

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Mood: Joy ~Merieth 3 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
[link] chapter 1 is done! hope you like it. it's a bit short, but the next part will make up for it.

just wanted to give our nameless soldier a bit of a back story.
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:icontallon90:
nicely done let me know if I need to explain anything about the battle
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:iconmerieth:
~Merieth 3 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
yeah sure you can explain it to be. Tallon's team comes and throws a flash bang (i think that's what you said?) and they infiltrate the city and kill the lord?

I was gonna have them come during the parade. after the lord is shot, they surrender but Tallon and his guys shoot them anyway, and the nameless soldier dies..
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:icontallon90:
flash and smoke so after their sight comes back they are surrounded by smoke and thats all fine as long as the main character is bleeding out with the lord gets killed
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~Merieth 3 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
hey there! just wanted to let you know that I'm about to start on the first part of your story commission! I should have it done in a day or so ^^ thank you so much for your patience!
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:icontallon90:
thanks for letting me know
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:iconmerieth:
~Merieth 3 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
just wondering, do you want it to be told from the perspective of the soldier (1st person)?
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*BlueRoseChan May 10, 2013   Digital Artist
A quick thanks...[link]
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